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  1. #16
    Quote Originally Posted by 临水听琴 View Post
    尝试口语,别有风味
    谢谢老师夸奖,多日不见,问好先生!

  2. #17
    Quote Originally Posted by 玉王 View Post
    [争知我,把一支笛,吹响天涯。好句!] *~ * ( ̄▽ ̄)*~* [好句!典雅洗练 ]
    谢谢老师夸奖!

  3. #18
    大家之作!慢慢学习中!特此专程问好!

  4. #19
    Quote Originally Posted by 西铁 View Post
    大家之作!慢慢学习中!特此专程问好!
    学习不敢,谢谢老师眷顾!因故久未上网,我也非常想念先生!

  5. #20
    也是信手拈来的感觉。有婉约,也有豪放。

  6. #21
    Quote Originally Posted by 一飞 View Post
    也是信手拈来的感觉。有婉约,也有豪放。
    谢先生夸奖鼓励!

  7. #22
    且把那、泪儿收住,先别话沧桑;来把那,酒杯高举,喝醉斜阳。

    这且把那来把那好句!呵呵,用词老到,深谙词风唱调。

  8. #23
    Quote Originally Posted by 北峰 View Post
    且把那、泪儿收住,先别话沧桑;来把那,酒杯高举,喝醉斜阳。

    这且把那来把那好句!呵呵,用词老到,深谙词风唱调。
    谢谢老师夸奖!

  9. #24
    "想俺娘、定增白发,闻犬声,又去揭窗纱。" 好句!刻畫入微。
    "且把那、泪儿收住,先别话沧桑;来把那,酒杯高举,喝醉斜阳。" 轉得好!

  10. #25
    Quote Originally Posted by godwink View Post
    "想俺娘、定增白发,闻犬声,又去揭窗纱。" 好句!刻畫入微。
    "且把那、泪儿收住,先别话沧桑;来把那,酒杯高举,喝醉斜阳。" 轉得好!
    谢先生夸奖!顺问好先生!

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